Posts : 15 Join date : 2016-06-10 Age : 29 Location : Unkown Wrestler Name(s) : Havoc (Christopher Sabertooth)
Subject: A New Chapter feedback Sat Jun 18, 2016 11:13 pm
Yo guys, so I know this was my first RP here at BFW. I am really looking forward for whatever future holds for Havoc here but a good way to start out is to take some feedback from you guys. I am a bit new to this format of on off camera roleplays so this one might be a little raw. But definitely let me know what you think. All feedbacks are welcome. Thanks in advance.
Havoc
Posts : 15 Join date : 2016-06-10 Age : 29 Location : Unkown Wrestler Name(s) : Havoc (Christopher Sabertooth)
Subject: Re: A New Chapter feedback Sat Jun 18, 2016 11:20 pm
Subject: Re: A New Chapter feedback Sun Jun 19, 2016 11:10 am
I liked it, good introduction. Maybe use a lighter color for text though.
Havoc
Posts : 15 Join date : 2016-06-10 Age : 29 Location : Unkown Wrestler Name(s) : Havoc (Christopher Sabertooth)
Subject: Re: A New Chapter feedback Sun Jun 19, 2016 2:54 pm
Alright cool. Thanks
Fuck You I'm The Champ Amis Fucking Shelton
Posts : 188 Join date : 2015-11-30 Age : 29 Location : London UK Wrestler Name(s) : Amis Shelton
Subject: Re: A New Chapter feedback Mon Jun 20, 2016 11:35 pm
I'm intrigued on how you go forward with this. It's a good introduction to who you are and I'm interested to see how your character develops as the shows go on.
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