Brutality 09 Feedback

Another show down and the start of some very nice looking storylines has been put into place.

As per our new system, I'd appreciate if folks could fill out the form below. Honesty is appreciated in the feedback, but we won't tolerate any needless flaming or arguments. Simply copy the code from the spoiler below when you begin your new post

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Segment Of The Night: Jack nearly busting a cap on Charlie's arse.
Why: best RP of the show - quite entertaining, well written and great storyline progression.

Sin Min & American Tommy's RP as runner-up... Man that RP is hilarious and great.

Match Of The Night: Tokyo & Ant vs The Order
Why: well written etc etc. Too bad the boy Tokyo had to take the loss .

Main event is a runner-up. Pretty good as well.

Favourite Match Result: Amis vs Wolfe
Why: fair result - know your role 'cause Amis is the main champ kek.

Biggest Surprise: Jack declared as World title contender by Adler.
Why: because it's a surprise... Wasn't expecting that at all tbh. Well, a good surprise.

Best Part Of The Show: Zacharias Adler showing up to get things under control.
Why: I believe it's something BFW was needing kayfabe-wise.

Overall Show Score: (8.5/10)

Any Additional Comments: good show once again. I would like to see The Order winning the matches clear - aka not having to trust American Tommy doing something to help lol (not a big deal tho)

Any Mistakes You Spotted: yeah... I don't see the sinner & saint stip

Mine for the most part echos Eight69

b]Segment Of The Night[/b]: Benny and Bobby
Why: Great writing, comedy and... hell, it might send Bobby into an overdue grave I think. #Wowiewowow

Match Of The Night: Amis / Wolfe
Why: It was a match I was personally looking forward to, and it did not disappoint.

Favourite Match Result: Kenji vs O-Solo
Why: Been impressed with Kenji, not so much with O-Solo. Good debut for a future champ should luck have his way.

Biggest Surprise: The gun being empty.
Why: Must be my sensation with killing of characters.

Best Part Of The Show: Vossler vs Mikael starts.
Why: 'cus I think we could do feud of the season with this one.

Worst Part Of The Show: O-Solo has a match.
Why: I liked him better gone.
How This Could Be Improved: Seems obvious, doesn't it?

Overall Show Score: (8/10)

Any Additional Comments: No quick-links at the start?

Any Mistakes You Spotted: O-Solo missing his pic. In general.

b]Segment Of The Night[/b]: Its a tie between the Jack/Charlie one, and the ones by Serena
Why: the Jack/charlie one looked like it came out of a gangster movie. The ones by Serena because i loved reading her stuff believe it or not.

Match Of The Night: Serena vs Ravenous
Why: Mother vs Son

Favourite Match Result: the Duke by reverse decision
Why: got to let go after you win

Biggest Surprise: Serena leaving(can be match or segment)
Why: loved reading her stuff. sad to see her go.

Best Part Of The Show: all of it
Why: just because

Worst Part Of The Show: none i could see (can be match or segment)
Why:
How This Could Be Improved:

Overall Show Score: 9.5(/10)

Any Additional Comments: nope

Any Mistakes You Spotted: nah, all was good man.

I will get around to doing things properly but I honestly marked the f*** out at the ending.

Just to address a few parts:

Eight69 wrote:

Biggest Surprise: Jack declared as World title contender by Adler.
Why: because it's a surprise... Wasn't expecting that at all tbh. Well, a good surprise.

Seems rare we catch you by surprise anymore. Glad we did.

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Any Additional Comments: good show once again. I would like to see The Order winning the matches clear - aka not having to trust American Tommy doing something to help lol (not a big deal tho)

We're heels, it's sort of our gimmick

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Any Mistakes You Spotted: yeah... I don't see the sinner & saint stip

The titles weren't being defended, plus that'll be something that comes later on.

Vossler wrote:

Any Additional Comments: No quick-links at the start?

By the time the show is done the editor lags like a motherfucker, and it takes ages to do the anchor links as it is. I like them too, but yea.

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Any Mistakes You Spotted: O-Solo missing his pic. In general.

Yes. But as far as I was aware Rey was done with the character, so I never updated the card to the newer look.

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Otherwise I appreciate the kind words and useful criticism, as usual.

Akragth wrote:

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Any Mistakes You Spotted: yeah... I don't see the sinner & saint stip

The titles weren't being defended, plus that'll be something that comes later on.

That's awesome.