Brutality #1 Feedback

Thought I'd go ahead and make this for you guys.

So, as fair warning, I know that a few pics are missing. Some are ones I forgot to make, or are ones I put off making 

I know that Mikael's and Rey's pics are missing, as are Zack Jack's NPCs. I'll add them in when I get them made.

But do list anything missing. Trying to read through the huge posts was pretty hard, and I put the whole thing together by myself, so there are doubtlessly mistakes in there. Good thing is, I can fix them after though the show has 'aired'!

Minus a few coloring issues I didn't really see anything.

Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall.

My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them.

Other than that good stuff!

I've tried to put a show up on Forumotion before and now I wonder how on earth you managed to fit all that text and ignored the limit lol.

Anyway my feedback is... I'm just glad I am part of this. The issues you've mentioned are all minor really, it happens. Top feds had those minor issues several times but they don't make the show look bad.

Great show and I haven't even read it 100% yet lol. Gonna get to it soon.

I see Hawk's point of view when it comes to match size but I think it's better this way. Save the big and more detailed matches for the PPV or bigger shows. Otherwise you might end up burning out.

But yeah don't wanna do a TL;DR read. Just awesome job Im happy to be part of BFW.

Fuck You I'm Amis Shelton wrote:

Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall.

My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them.

Other than that good stuff!

A valid point. But I will say that most the efed shows I've read have matches which are quite a bit shorter. Like, a couple of moves, a finisher, done. Honestly, most people skip past the matches and straight to the results.

Akragth wrote:

Fuck You I'm Amis Shelton wrote:

Fantastic read and brilliant debut show overall.

My only piece is of criticism is that the matches are a bit short, which is fair enough considering you're hand-writing them.

Other than that good stuff!

A valid point. But I will say that most the efed shows I've read have matches which are quite a bit shorter. Like, a couple of moves, a finisher, done. Honestly, most people skip past the matches and straight to the results.

Yup which I took into consideration too. It does save room for exciting and longer PPV matches like Fern said.

Good show. I wish my match wasn't the length of a Divas match on Raw though (before the Diva Revolution started).

I enjoyed the read.

A great first show! Kudos to Ak for writing the matches on his own.
Thanks to everyone that contributed.

Good on Ak for whipping-up those matches by himself, I know how that feels from doing RAW!

I liked the extra touch of there being a couple of pics per character, like one for the promo and another for matches! Nice little something that you didn't have to do but you did! 8)

Great showing by everyone who wrote also! Thanks for diving-in and helping to get something new and special started with a BANG!!!

Will we ever know our scores?

Probably not. Not unless you guys really want to.

It would be nice, even if it's only in the instance of like PPV RPs and special occasions.

I presume the ranking system reflects the RP Scores?

I'd actually rather not publish the scores, because I think it'd probably cause more drama than it'd achieve anything. The rankings already reflect the scores, and I personally think that's enough. But, as I said, if people really want the scores then I'll go that way.

That aside, if people want feedback for their RPs, then we can accommodate that, but we don't need to give the scores to do that.

Loh wrote:

I presume the ranking system reflects the RP Scores?

Yea. I'm recording everything into a Google spreadsheet, to ensure that good records are kept for this place. The rankings I put together currently work on the cumulative scores from the past 3 shows, so the rankings themselves give an indication of the character's performance over the previous six weeks.

Tbh I don't really care about the other people's Rp scores. I only care about my score so, in my opinion, if one wants to know the respective Rp score, one should take it to pms.