Brutality #2 Feedback

As title.

My RP doesn't make any sense where it was placed is really my only gripe.

Wolfe wins! Wolfe wins! Wolfe wins! And still your greatest tag wrestler of all time (suck it Carty)

Sinister Minister wrote:

My RP doesn't make any sense where it was placed is really my only gripe.

Well, I first asked people to pick an RP slot nearly two weeks ago, so you definitely had time to tell me precisely where to place it.

Because of how putting a show together here works, adding an RP early in, when I've already created that part of the show, means I have to move stuff out. Which means I have to move stuff in and out of 3-4 posts because of putting each subsequent post over its character limit. Doing that takes time, and by the point I was adding your RP, I'd already had to do it a good 3-4 times.

So your RP got put wherever I had a space, same as Hannah's.

I got rekt so hard =(
only had like one move. I guess my wrestler forgot he was supposed to fight.

I'm only halfway through the show but I think it's running very smoothly. I thought my match (Aelyra vs Mikael) was fantastic! I loved the humour and I love that no one is making me out to be completely useless as a chick I'm also really enjoying the commentary throughout all of the matches. I just hope we can get a few more people on board with match writing so we can make them longer.

Also, there are a few colours that are clashing too heavily with the background. It'd be great if you all looked at your rps in the show to see if your colour clashes. For example, the maroon/dark red colour is too hard to read so I have to highlight it. I know my colour included clashes a little too much on the logo so I plan to change it. It will help readability if we could do this

Finally got back home and had the opportunity to read the show 100%.

Yogi wrote:

Also, there are a few colours that are clashing too heavily with the background. It'd be great if you all looked at your rps in the show to see if your colour clashes. For example, the maroon/dark red colour is too hard to read so I have to highlight it. I know my colour included clashes a little too much on the logo so I plan to change it. It will help readability if we could do this

That. That. I could barely read Helm's commentary, for example. Is the fed using black background? Then you shall color your speeches bright colors lol.

Besides the color issue, I think the 2nd show was even better than the 1st one. Great content overall. Good matches, good rps. Good job everyone.

And thanks Ak for putting up the show. I'm sure it's a paaaain in the ass.

AdamWolfe wrote:

Wolfe wins! Wolfe wins! Wolfe wins! And still your greatest tag wrestler of all time (suck it Carty)

It was the first tag match and this kid already thinks that he is the dogs bollocks!  8)

Vossler wrote:

Before.

Spoiler:

8)

After

Spoiler:

Oh he mad!
He maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!

The colour things has been mentioned! Brighter colours I say! BRIGHTER! SO BRIGHT THEY BURN YOUR EYES!

I'll try to write in a brighter color, sorry about that folks.

Eight69 wrote:

Besides the color issue, I think the 2nd show was even better than the 1st one. Great content overall. Good matches, good rps. Good job everyone.

That's because this show had me 8)

Solid show.